This week our class has been creating our own characters and writing a story! Here's mine - have a read and leave me a comment!
Friday, 23 November 2018
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1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Kia ora, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School. I like the way you have made a very original story and made some cool pictures. You taught me that you don't always have to make a long detailed story to make a good one. To improve, you could fix some spelling mistakes and maybe add some detail. Example sentance for when she Bubble is in the pipe: Bubble drifted through the pipe, gulping for breath. Why did you make this story?
ReplyDelete-Amelia