I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, 27 September 2018
T3W10 Writing
this week I have been practising using capital letters and full stops. I have made a book using google slides to write and illustrate my story. Please have a look and leave me a comment about my writing.
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Michaela,
ReplyDeleteWell done on a great, bright and exciting book! You have thought carefully about where capital letters fit into your story and included them at the start of sentences and on names of people and places. I really liked the interesting words in your story because I was able to imagine the story using the description - tino pai! Next time just check that the writing can be read easily as some of it was blending into the background :)
From Miss W
Hey Michaela,
ReplyDeletei love what you made it is relly nete. you are so good at doing book. you have been working so hard